^^^ Pitch Deck and Recording
Project Pitch
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Your spoken recording of your pitch is pretty clear and does a pretty good job of describing your project, Josh. My only issue is that it is incredibly user unfriendly. If you think of your audience member (or reader/listener) the fact that you have to click on multiple links to get to the actually information is ineffective and the fact that your spoken recording uses phrases like “as you can see” but isn’t linked to any visual is confusing. Can we reformat this so the slide and deck and audio are embedded on the page and maybe merge the slide deck and audio so that your reader can see what you are referring to when it is appropriate in your script?
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